Revision: done, yo. Definitely better, more persuasive, 25% longer, more articulate, and clearer framing of my book's argument than the earlier draft. Thanks, dismissive reviewer!
St. Ambrose and Arlinghurst
10 months ago
Meanwhile the mind, from pleasure less,
Withdraws into its happiness:
The mind, that ocean where each kind
Does straight its own resemblance find;
Yet it creates, transcending these,
Far other worlds, and other seas;
Annihilating all that's made
To a green thought in a green shade.
Andrew Marvell, "The Garden" 41-48
5 comments:
Good for you!
You feel that? That's me dancing.
Yippee! Onward, summer!
Woohoo! Celebration time!
Congratulations! I feel such fear for this in my own near future; it's good to hear that one can make good use of frustrating critiques.
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