Revision: done, yo. Definitely better, more persuasive, 25% longer, more articulate, and clearer framing of my book's argument than the earlier draft. Thanks, dismissive reviewer!
Portrait of Clara (as a chemist)
1 month ago
Meanwhile the mind, from pleasure less,
Withdraws into its happiness:
The mind, that ocean where each kind
Does straight its own resemblance find;
Yet it creates, transcending these,
Far other worlds, and other seas;
Annihilating all that's made
To a green thought in a green shade.
Andrew Marvell, "The Garden" 41-48
5 comments:
Good for you!
You feel that? That's me dancing.
Yippee! Onward, summer!
Woohoo! Celebration time!
Congratulations! I feel such fear for this in my own near future; it's good to hear that one can make good use of frustrating critiques.
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