tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1794978458772149149.post541906996640734046..comments2023-10-25T07:38:16.249-07:00Comments on Green Thoughts: Someone take that guy's red pencil away!Renaissance Girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06243095907452011303noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1794978458772149149.post-44729416969247840142010-07-07T20:10:16.115-07:002010-07-07T20:10:16.115-07:00I had to read that passage twice because the stupi...I had to read that passage twice because the stupid underlinings distracted me so much. Curse the red pencil!Lexy and Jaredhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12540165482894644662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1794978458772149149.post-7356437529437911722010-07-07T20:06:30.142-07:002010-07-07T20:06:30.142-07:00I have a voice in my head speaking this passage, w...I have a voice in my head speaking this passage, with special emphasis upon the underlinings, and that voice is making me laugh. I especially love the underline of the word "becomes." Because that's a really subtle thing there, that word. You'd really want to both note and remember that.Lisa B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10646181766775405935noreply@blogger.com